Tuesday, August 14, 2012

Promise Me Eternity by Ian Fox

3 stars
Copy (bound printout/manuscript) received for  review.

Promising story, but needed serious serious editing.

The Dr. Miner storyline-- unnecessary complication.  Same with most of the Jerry Duncan storyline.

Also, the writing wasn't stellar and needing tightening/editing.

**Because my review copy was a bound manuscript I have NO IDEA if further editing was done before publication or in the course of publication.  I can only review what I read. :)

The story is definitely interesting, though.

If you like a good thriller and don't mind random distractions or racey scenes, this might be a good pick.

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